Manuscript Critiques

Manuscript critiques offer honest, personalized feedback to improve your characterization, plot, pacing, themes, dialogue and writing style. Send in your story through the form linked below, receive your critique, and reply with clarifying questions or concerns--the first set of questions will be answered. These manuscript critiques are intended for longer pieces of writing. All submissions must be in 12 pt Times New Roman, double-spaced, with one-inch margins. 

I like to run everything I write past Gloria to get her crisp-witted, thoughtful perspective. She always gives me great ideas for revisions 

 -- Hannah Lee Kidder, author and YouTuber

First 10 Pages


First 50 Pages


First 100 Pages


Full Manuscript

$1 per page 

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